Title: The Force Binds Us
Author:
wicked_jester
Fandom/Universe: Star Wars
Characters/Pairings: Kylo Ren/Rey
Rating: Mature
Length: 100 words
Summary: A chance encounter between Kylo Ren and Rey in the wilds of Ahch-To leads to a moment neither had anticipated.
Prompts: Amphibian, lost, looking back on the past, dancing, volcano, crunchy, cutting device.
Kylo Ren lost himself utterly.
Rey had claimed his mouth with her own, swift and bold. He kissed her back. Her lips parted, and their tongues met in a slow, erotic dance.
They stood together in the purifying waterfall below a slumbering volcano, immersed and amphibious as Gungans for a time.
She draped an arm over his shoulder, her nails cutting into his skin with delicious pain. Ren’s mind flitted back to the few ill-fated romances of his distant past, finding no comparison.
This was new; this felt right.
Suddenly, a crunch of twigs nearby. They sprang apart, enemies again.
Author:
Fandom/Universe: Star Wars
Characters/Pairings: Kylo Ren/Rey
Rating: Mature
Length: 100 words
Summary: A chance encounter between Kylo Ren and Rey in the wilds of Ahch-To leads to a moment neither had anticipated.
Prompts: Amphibian, lost, looking back on the past, dancing, volcano, crunchy, cutting device.
Kylo Ren lost himself utterly.
Rey had claimed his mouth with her own, swift and bold. He kissed her back. Her lips parted, and their tongues met in a slow, erotic dance.
They stood together in the purifying waterfall below a slumbering volcano, immersed and amphibious as Gungans for a time.
She draped an arm over his shoulder, her nails cutting into his skin with delicious pain. Ren’s mind flitted back to the few ill-fated romances of his distant past, finding no comparison.
This was new; this felt right.
Suddenly, a crunch of twigs nearby. They sprang apart, enemies again.
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Date: 2016-06-03 03:36 pm (UTC)Truth - I love this! Don't change a thing. I really like that Rey is doing the claiming. I really need to go check out what else you're written for these two...
However, I think you need to take another look at how many prompts you're claiming with it. [hint-water] Thanks!
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Date: 2016-06-03 03:58 pm (UTC)Lol, I guess I trimmed a bit too much. The waterfall is really supposed to have a mystical, cleansing effect, originally it said so but stripped down to what it currently is, I can see how that gets lost.
I'm happy that you liked the fic. I'll just alter the number of prompts. :)
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Date: 2016-06-03 08:24 pm (UTC)The mystic waterfall sounds like a cool idea. (That gives me ideas. You make me woobie Kylo so much, lol.)
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Date: 2016-06-04 12:08 am (UTC)It could SO happen :D
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Date: 2016-06-10 09:03 pm (UTC)It could and it should happen. ;) They'd make a beautiful couple!
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