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Title "Hux's Song"
Author pony_express
Fandom/Universe Star Wars
Characters/Pairings Hux / Ren
Rating/Warnings/Genre G
Length Drabble- 100 words
Notes/Summary, A very messy, unrefined, unedited piece that came to me literally seconds after posting the pervious fic. I was thinking about how to incoperate the other prompts into a fic, and BOOM! General Hux, a classical pianist was born!
Hux plays, Ren listens.
Prompts - "a musical instrument"

The general’s long lean fingers graced the keys so lightly, so effortlessly. And Ren took note of how perfectly delicate his hands were; not war torn and damaged like his. His lightsabre burnt to hold, but the general’s pen never treated it’s own the same.

It wasn’t just the hands that Ren noted, for the tune was violent and aggressive, but Hux played it classically. And that was Hux, Ren released. So pure and unscarred by war, but far from innocent and untouched by it.

It was a beautifully mirrored thing that Ren admired far after Hux had finished playing.


Date: 2016-08-23 08:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wicked-jester.livejournal.com
This was lovely! I can absolutely see Hux as a classically trained pianist who chooses to play music that is violent and beautiful at once. I like how Kylo notices all those subtle details about Hux and compares them to himself. Neither of them are untouched by war, and it shows, but in different ways. Nice job. :)

Date: 2016-08-24 03:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
Doesn't look so unrefined to me :) Very nice! I can totally see Hux as a pianist. And he certainly uses different instruments of war than Kylo... I like his observation about the pen vs. the lightsaber.

Well done!

Date: 2016-08-27 03:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luminations.livejournal.com
I edit a lot myself. I envy people who can write quickly and be DONE with it quickly. But no matter how much I edit something, how long I let it sit around while other edits occur to me, it never fails -- right after I post it everywhere, I still think of something else I should have added to it or revised. It's ridiculous!

Yes, the pen is mightier quote! And "my mind is my weapon" also comes to mind.

You're welcome! People like it so you should write more :D
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Date: 2016-09-12 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dancingdragon3.livejournal.com
And now I'm falling in love with Hux, of all people, lol.

Awesome drabble! I love this idea for the two of them, and will happily read more of it :-)
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